Some reader comments when the book’s manuscript is posted on some forums:
Hot, emotional, and moved the plot forward. Well done.” – Sahqomedpeytte
Wow, way to go…
Loved all chapters… am sooo relieved I found this story in the hall of fame section recently and that all the chapters had been completed…
Not only did I stay up all night reading cos I couldn’t stop but I cried as well… brilliant build up and storytelling.
Please keep writing and you definitely have another story in Vanessa’s life in Italy…
Thank you so much!” – 1994lesbian
“As I write this I’m feeling melancholy, nostalgia and a bit of sadness at the prospect of this being the final chapter of this series. Thank you for taking us readers on such a wonderful journey with three very loveable -and very human- characters. As a fan of this series I sincerely hope that you do write another Heather & Vanessa or even an adult Jules spinoff story. But, in all honesty, I only think you should any kind of follow up story if creative inspiration is plenrtiful.
As it stands, you’ve brought the story full circle beautifully. I love that you gave Vanessa some extra closure regarding her Italian girlfriend, and I love that Heather isn’t jealous but accepts that a deceased love will always have a part of your heart, and that’s ok. That chapter, to me, showed just how much Heather and Vanessa belong together. And that ‘it’s a vine’ inside joke at the end? I’d almost forgotten Jules had said that, but that was brilliant!
Please keep on writing. Looking forward to whatever story you’ll endeavour next.
And if that’s not on Literotica, please let us know -somehow- where we can keep following and supporting your stories.” – Genevieve
“Great way to end this beautiful story
I loved this story very much. From beginning to the end, it was beautifully told. The characters were believable( except for Jules in some parts, I think she seems to talk like someone older than a five year old). You could really feel Heather’s insecurities with the relationship throughout the story and could totally see her doing what she did in the last chapter. Also, I like how you had Vanessa’s sister caused the separation. I thought it would happen but not in the way I thought it would. I like how Vanessa was so patient with her even if I would have been fine with her cussing Heather out in the last chapter. Nice touch with the ending, too. My complaint with this story is it never explored Heather’s feelings with the relationship becoming public, especially at the company. Maybe that could be a side story. I also felt that the last chapter was rushed a bit but the ending more than made up for it. Again, thanks for the story and look forward to see more of your work.” – bjs25
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