The comments of readers when the manuscript is posted on some forums:
“OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!! didn’t even noticed how lengthy it was. I was so caught up in the story and didn’t want it to end… amazing read” – danielle80s
“Could not put it down, like reading a novel. Hoping there’s more stories to come.” – Nurse_Twisted
“This read was absolutely amazing. I loved every chapter and it had me hooked from the very beginning. It had me hooked for more than the sex, but for the emotion behind every action of both Zoe and Julie. I tend to empathize with characters in books as I am reading which is one of my strange quirks, and reading this story seriously messed with that quirk in many ways.” – EroticDollar
“I loved your story. As soon as I started reading it I couldn’t stop! I like the longer stories, I allows us to truly understand the characters and follow them.
All I can say is BRAVO!!! Please keep writing!” – johnnyboy
“Truly a wonderful story, well written. It was amazing how you brought two totally different characters together making their lives complete. I look forward to reading what ever else you may write in the future.” – Sexy_Case
“Wow! This story had me glued to the screen. It was beautifully written and the characters were so unique and developed. By far my favorite story on Lit. Please don’t stop writing.” – 4smokingguns
“This is an amazing story! It all plays out perfectly and the journey was unbelievable. The characters, the (pet)names, the interpersonal relations were all amazingly put together into this mind-blowingnarrative. And here’s something fun: I read this with a friend- odd, I know. We were talking about the story on facebook (privately) and let me tell you- this is an amazing read, but it’s better when it’s done with someone else.
I find it amazing that a story can touch people differently and to be able to take something that is usually labeled as “crass” or “perverted” and turn it into an actual beautifully put together story is inspiring. I hope I haven’t offended you in anyway and hope you continue to write “ – millcrk78
“It never ceases to amaze me that there are people like the author of this wonderful story giving the fruits of their labors way on Lit, and there are people of far lesser ability and talent charging for their drivel. I’ve no idea what the commercial market would be for this as a book, or an ebook, but this is way better than a lot of stuff that gets published that people try to sell for money. Thank you” – peter2802
“I just couldn’t stop reading it. You are really talented writter. Just keep up the good work. I hope we will soon read another story from you” – ly18
“Amazing story Keep doing what your doing because your a gifted writer and I hope to read another one of your amazing stories that you wrote” – CAWMSJR
“Wow, simply wow! …I could not stop reading this story! Well written, intense descriptions, loveable characters..it had everything! Perfect length! Please write more…” – Lustafterme
“The best love story I’ve ever read, beautifully well written. I didn’t want to stop reading,the complexity of your characters was awesome. I’m looking forward to more from you, can’t wait.” – slidejob23
“I could not stop reading this, this story derscribes such a complex character (Bear) never wanting to show her true emotions yet one person was able to understand her.Also the description given how (Honey) can connect to a wild animal because she cares .This story had everything.” – Cindy1003
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